All over the world societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. Obesity affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How can it be tackled?

For over the
last
two or three decades, more and more people are being suffered from over-weighting all around the world. There has been a
boombing
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booming
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rate in the
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of
obesity
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among youngsters.
This
esaay
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essay
will look at the reasons for
this
and propose some solutions.
Firstly
, a growing number of children these days have a sedentary lifestyle.
This
is because fewer and fewer adolescents are inclined to outdoor activities
whereas
these hobbies were the most favourable in the past. Proven by statistics, one out of every five kids has been active enough on a daily basis and has been interested in hectic sports
such
as football, basketball,
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volleyball
and so on.
For instance
, my ten years old nephew has never played hide and seek and he has shown reluctance and
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technological games
instead
. To tackle
this
problem, the government should introduce compulsory courses into the curriculum with the aim of inducing teenagers to be energetic enough and get rid of
obesity
.
Secondly
, the majority of folks are in a hurry nowadays and they often opt for skipping homemade
meals
and
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packaged ready junk foods rather than preparing healthy dishes at home. For
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, gathering around the family table
as well as
taking healthy nourishment have lost the temptability among young generations;
therefore
, consuming unhealthy fatty
meals
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becoming popular as time goes by and lays the foundation to collect fat in the body and opens up doors to cureless diseases.
This
problem could be addressed by enhancing taxes on takeaway foods immediately so as to make people cook healthy
meals
at home. In conclusion,
although
most of
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meals
are deliberately delicious
as a result
of
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more consumers, they have several negative impacts on human health
along with
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to
obesity
. My view is that
obesity
is not insurmountable if mentioned solutions are taken.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Obesity
  • Overweight
  • Epidemic
  • Sedentary
  • Processed food
  • Fast food
  • Nutritional education
  • Awareness
  • Stress
  • Emotional eating
  • Genetic factors
  • Access
  • Healthy food options
  • Marketing
  • Urbanization
  • Lifestyles
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