The internet has made knowledge immediately available to people through computers and smartphones all around the world. Much of this knowledge is also free. Discuss the advantages and Disadvantages of this trend.

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internet
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. There are many advantages
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the
internet
that
people
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people
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with out
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moving or
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getting
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Moreover
, they can buy from
deferent
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places
out side
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outside
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of their country.
In addition
, they can make money online by making an online business .
People
can help others by making their life
more easy
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.
People
can make
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apple
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the
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that
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they can find in it some help
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people
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internet
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that can help them with their
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life .
On the other hand
, there are many disadvantages to
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that can
be find
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. First , hackers
they
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can hack
people
's
informition
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information
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them knowing .Hackers can get all
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money and they can do
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about it . So
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why
people
don't like
useing
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Moreover
,
people
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wast
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their time
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the
internet
by doing nothing . In
conclusion
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the
internet
is very useful. we should use it carefully by avoiding hackers and stop wasting our time.
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