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The arts,including music and theatre are considered to be important in the society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyle? Should the art be included in the school curriculum?

#arts #music #theatre #society #place #lifestyle #art #school #curriculum
The significance of creative activities which comprises
of
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the
arts
, music, theatre, painting and many others in any given
society
 can not be
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. In our contemporary life, the position of
arts
 is still distinctly visible.
There fore
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, the inclusion of these subjects in the school curriculum should be of paramount importance.
Arts
 is a part of culture and culture is a way of life of a particular
people
 or
society
.
It’s
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 impact on humans
are
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 numerous from creative thinking to appreciating the essence of nature which can be in
form
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 of sculptures, architectural designs, literature and many more.
Further more
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, it helps in learning, most importantly, children are stimulated to learn in an enhancing environment with
variety
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 of
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 learning objects.
In addition
, music as a branch of
this
 unique subject is “the food of
soul
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” as opined by Arthur Schopenhauer in 1818
from
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 his book “The World as Will and Representation “. Just like our bodies need food and energy to thrive so
do
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 music acts as food for the soul, rejuvenating it , filling it with energy and vitality.
Moreover
, visiting the theatre or the cinema can help
people
 to unwind, ease off tension thereby reducing stress and greatly improve mental health and emotional wellbeing.
Although
, some
people
 in
the
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society
 are
skeptical
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 about the marketability of
arts
 graduates compared to those in Engineering, Medicine, Information technology and many more
but
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it is a known fact that many
people
 in the field of creative
arts
 have made a niche for themselves. An example among many others is Professor Wole Soyinka, a winner of
Noble
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prize
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 in Literature is a Nigerian playwright, novelist, poet and essayist in the English language. Conclusively, since the
arts
is
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 a part of
culture
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the culture
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 of a given
society
 which is the pride of the particular
people
 and as much as students are encouraged to choose subjects/ courses they are passionate about, the importance and the benefits of creative
arts
 should be explained to them too
hence
 the inclusion of these unique subjects in the school curriculum to assist them make informed choices.
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