the two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities.
The two maps illustrate an
Island
in two different periods of time, before and after facilitation for tourists.
Before the facilitation of the Island
, there was looked completely empty with only trees and a beach. After the construction of tourist structures, accommodations have been built on both sides of the island
which are separated by a reception at the centre of the Island
, also
connect to each other by footpaths.In the middle of the ,houses a circle has been shaped which on the one side there are some trees in the circle.Reception is both surrounded and connected to the pier and restaurant by vehicle tracks which were built recently.The restaurant is placed at the top of the Island
and the pier is at the bottom under the Reception.
Overall
, in comparison, both maps of the Island
had many changes, many buildings have been built on the Island
, but the shape of the Island
did not change at all.Submitted by mohammadbizhani7 on
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