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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many have argued in recent years that the spread of
English
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 as a
language
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 spoken globally will continue to show more pros and fewer cons ,
while
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 many agree with
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 idea others don't , I completely agree with
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 notion as the more speakers the
language
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 gets it will provide more study and work opportunities
as well as
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 improving tourism around the world . For starters , the
English
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language
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 is gradually becoming the
language
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 of knowledge and business ,
therefore
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 mastering it at a professional level will certainly come in handy , for ,instance most big companies in Saudia Arabia require job applicants to speak
English
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 as they undergo their job interviews in
English
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 rather than Arabic (the most spoken
language
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 in the country) that said , it's essential to learn
English
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 even though some believe it comes with downsides.
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 , the
English
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language
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 has always been the way all tourists communicate with each other despite the differences in their nationalities ,
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 it's spreading across a particular nation can drastically boost the economy via tourism as the country will get a reputation of being '' Tourist friendly ''
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 , The Netherlands has always been a popular non-
English
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 speaking tourist destination one of the main reasons is that more than 90% of the population speaks
English
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 fluently which makes it easier for tourists to engage in different activities without worrying about the
language
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 barrier .
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 , its evident that the
English
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language
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 becoming the unified global
language
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 has a positive impact on both the personal and national level as it gives that who is speaks it an advantage in the modern world and
also
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 excelling countries' economies , with drawbacks of
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 spreading being almost not existing compared to the many benefits.

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