You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you did not attend say what you will do to make up for it

Dear MK, I hope you are doing well. I am writing

this

letter to offer my apologies as I did not join the lesson and I hope you accept my excuse. Let me explain my situation. when I was on my way to class yesterday. I got into a car collision and I had to stay on the scene for a long time waiting for the cops to arrive

then

I went to the collision report centre to report the accident and after ,that I had to call the car insurance to claim the collision.

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day I went to the hospital to check up on my body.

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it was a

such

long day. Would you kindly send me the record to be able to listen to the lesson as it was an important one in the semester

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once again I am so sorry for the inconvenience. Thank you for your time and consideration. regards, Iman

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
3Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

160 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You missed one of the most important lessons of your teacher. Write a letter to your teacher. In your letter apologize for not attending explain why you did not attend say what you will do to make up for it

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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