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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary school to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

#people #levels #education #school #universities #time #facts #skills
Some people claim that education systems
commonly
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 based upon
on
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too
much
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 academic or
feneral
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general
 facts
while
 practical
skills
stays
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second
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 priority. I totally agree
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this
 saying as a man who supports the idea that
skills
 should not be ignored. On
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 hand,
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 all levels of education, even though being very important, there is too much time
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spent on learning facts
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. A student does not matter
be
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a member of
primary
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a primary
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school
 or a university always struggles
while
 learning and tends to forget his/her both previous
knowledges
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knowledge
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 and
skills
 because of not getting enough treatment. To give an example, when I was in technical
school
, we used to have a
cirruculum
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curriculum
 that did not have enough experiments after
lessons
. Only one lesson had
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 time to make practical
studyings
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studying
 that I
am still have
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 good
skills
by
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having past experiences about it and it is still sustainable.
On the other hand
, even if it takes time, learning practical
skills
 should be the main basis of any educational system. Learners ought to make as much
experiment
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 and training as they can to understand not only their
lessons
 but
also
 how to deal with problems.
For instance
, an ordinary primary
school
 student learns how to
cumlivate
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cultivate
 vegetables in their
lessons
. In case a primary
school
cirruculum
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curriculum
that
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has enough practical
lessons
 to support their knowledge with abilities, students become
more handy
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 and understand how to grow a tomato
thoroughtly
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thoroughly
. To summarize, any educational system in the world should support practical
skills
 as much as learning facts to make our brilliant generation more eligible.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dual learning systems
  • theoretical knowledge
  • practical application
  • project-based learning
  • real-world scenarios
  • retention
  • soft skills
  • communication
  • teamwork
  • problem-solving
  • curriculum
  • fact memorization
  • integrate technology
  • coding
  • digital literacy
  • assessment methods
  • portfolios
  • practical demonstrations
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