Giving detailed information of crime in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the world,there have various newspapers and tv news

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detailed

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of criminal activities which have bad impacts on

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environment. Well,

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masses argue that

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should take some action

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them. I

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with it as it has both positive and negative impacts on society,

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will try to explain my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.

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government

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on news channels to display complete

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crime

because

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children can be influenced by them.

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, children learn techniques of

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they will start committing

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number of

crimes

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of India and it resulted that nearly 40%

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school

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restricted those students who had done

crimes

at their learning ages.

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the society because they can get knowledge about the

crimes

initiated in their nation. So that, they can follow some precautions

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and get aware of not

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crimes

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that

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robbery done in those houses which are not locked properly because

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are not away that they can

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by robbery if they could not

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their doors and windows.

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30%

houses

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remains safe because owner

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aware

about

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these types of

crime

. In summary,

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that giving

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depends on society. If they read or watch to gain knowledge about

crimes

is good and if they get addicted

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it definitely

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a problem

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the country. After that

government

can take action on showing and giving details on

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or in newspapers.

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Giving detailed information of crime in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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