Giving detailed information of crime in newspapers and on television has bad consequences. Some suggest that government should impose some restriction on them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In the world,there have various newspapers and tv news
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give
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that give
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detailed
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explanations
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of criminal activities which have bad impacts on
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environment. Well,
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masses argue that
government
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them. I
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with it as it has both positive and negative impacts on society,
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will try to explain my point of view in the upcoming paragraphs.
Firstly
,the reason why the
government
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on news channels to display complete
information
of
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a
crime
because
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children can be influenced by them.
This
is because whenever
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information
about a
crime
is broadcasted on
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channel
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, children learn techniques of
crime
and
then
they will start committing
crimes
in the same way as mentioned in the previous cases.
This
result in the
in the
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number of
crimes
.
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sarvey
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survey
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of India and it resulted that nearly 40%
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school
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schools
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restricted those students who had done
crimes
at their learning ages.
Secondly
, detailed
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about
crime
scanner
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scanners
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the society because they can get knowledge about the
crimes
initiated in their nation. So that, they can follow some precautions
while
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the task
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task
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tasks
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and get aware of not
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in
crimes
.
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, a survey was done and
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the results
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that
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presents
robbery done in those houses which are not locked properly because
persons
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are not away that they can
made
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by robbery if they could not
locked
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their doors and windows.
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,
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30%
houses
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remains safe because owner
are
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aware
about
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these types of
crime
. In summary,
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the use
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that giving
detail
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information
depends on society. If they read or watch to gain knowledge about
crimes
is good and if they get addicted
then
it definitely
cause
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causes
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a problem
to
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the country. After that
government
can take action on showing and giving details on
channel
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channels
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or in newspapers.
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