What do you think are the main causes of inequality between rich and poor nations in the world? What can be done to reduce this gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It seems that in the world we live today, there are still many differences between the nations that are considered to be rich
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and those
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are considered to be poor. In
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I will examine some reasons for that phenomenon and I will suggest some solutions to address
this
problem. There are two key factors that contribute to
this
gap which increasingly grows. The first one is the lack of resources.
For instance
, Africa is a state
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most of the population
are
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poor.
This
happens because the government don't have any natural products to trade with.
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their income is very low and it is almost impossible to improve and upgrade any type of
system
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a low educational
system
, financial
system
, and economic
system
which affects everything directly.
Secondly
, those
countries
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usually
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from
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of technological knowledge, keeping them behind everyone.
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Tibet seemingly
live
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on the same timeline as the rest of the world, but they never invested in learning any advanced technology, and that's why they still live like in the 19th century, without running water or sometimes even electricity. To improve those states situation there are some steps that need to be taken.
Firstly
, If those states will provide any incentives for
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to come over, from any field type
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to research, develop technologies, or teach and improve the current systems and infrastructures, and in return to gain financial benefits, it will surely contribute
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those
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inequality.
In addition
, if those
countries
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an agreement with a richer country, they can exchange needed resources between them.
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, Greece signed
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a trading agreement with the United States . Greece will provide natural gas, and in exchange, will receive money to improve
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army. In conclusion, it is true that
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some
countries
have more luck than others in
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vareity
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variety
of
field
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.
This
should concern
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all nations globally and make them
to
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unite and find
soultions
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solutions
to migrate poverty and help to
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the weak
countries
for the sake of humanity.
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