What do you think are the main causes of inequality between rich and poor nations in the world? What can be done to reduce this gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
It seems that in the world we live today, there are still many differences between the nations that are considered to be rich
,
and those Remove the comma
apply
who
are considered to be poor. In Correct pronoun usage
that
this
essay
I will examine some reasons for that phenomenon and I will suggest some solutions to address Add a comma
,essay
this
problem.
There are two key factors that contribute to this
gap which increasingly grows. The first one is the lack of resources. For instance
, Africa is a state which
most of the population Change preposition
in which
are
poor. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
This
happens because the government don't have any natural products to trade with. Therefore
their income is very low and it is almost impossible to improve and upgrade any type of system
. It results with
a low educational Change preposition
in
system
, financial system
, and economic system
which affects everything directly. Secondly
, those countries
are
usually Unnecessary verb
apply
suffers
from Correct subject-verb agreement
suffer
lack
of technological knowledge, keeping them behind everyone. Correct article usage
a lack
For
example
Tibet seemingly Add a comma
,example
live
on the same timeline as the rest of the world, but they never invested in learning any advanced technology, and that's why they still live like in the 19th century, without running water or sometimes even electricity.
To improve those states situation there are some steps that need to be taken. Change the verb form
lives
Firstly
, If those states will provide any incentives for great
Add an article
the great
mind
to come over, from any field typeFix the agreement mistake
minds
,
to research, develop technologies, or teach and improve the current systems and infrastructures, and in return to gain financial benefits, it will surely contribute Remove the comma
apply
for
those Change preposition
to
contries
inequality. Change noun form
contries'
In addition
, if those countries
will sign on
an agreement with a richer country, they can exchange needed resources between them. Change preposition
apply
For example
, Greece signed on
a trading agreement with the United States . Greece will provide natural gas, and in exchange, will receive money to improve Change preposition
apply
their
army.
In conclusion, it is true that Correct pronoun usage
its
the
some Remove the article
apply
countries
have more luck than others in Correct article usage
a vareity
vareity
of Correct your spelling
variety
field
. Fix the agreement mistake
fields
This
should concern to
all nations globally and make them Change preposition
apply
to
unite and find Change the verb form
apply
soultions
to migrate poverty and help to Correct your spelling
solutions
strength
the weak Replace the word
strengthen
countries
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