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What do you think are the main causes of inequality between rich and poor nations in the world? What can be done to reduce this gap? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

#inequality #nations #world #gap
It seems that in the world we live today, there are still many differences between the nations that are considered to be rich
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 and those
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 are considered to be poor. In
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 I will examine some reasons for that phenomenon and I will suggest some solutions to address
this
 problem. There are two key factors that contribute to
this
 gap which increasingly grows. The first one is the lack of resources.
For instance
, Africa is a state
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 most of the population
are
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 poor.
This
 happens because the government don't have any natural products to trade with.
Therefore
 their income is very low and it is almost impossible to improve and upgrade any type of
system
. It results
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 a low educational
system
, financial
system
, and economic
system
 which affects everything directly.
Secondly
, those
countries
are
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usually
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 from
lack
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 of technological knowledge, keeping them behind everyone.
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 Tibet seemingly
live
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 on the same timeline as the rest of the world, but they never invested in learning any advanced technology, and that's why they still live like in the 19th century, without running water or sometimes even electricity. To improve those states situation there are some steps that need to be taken.
Firstly
, If those states will provide any incentives for
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mind
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 to come over, from any field type
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 to research, develop technologies, or teach and improve the current systems and infrastructures, and in return to gain financial benefits, it will surely contribute
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 those
contries
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 inequality.
In addition
, if those
countries
 will sign
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an agreement with a richer country, they can exchange needed resources between them.
For example
, Greece signed
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a trading agreement with the United States . Greece will provide natural gas, and in exchange, will receive money to improve
their
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 army. In conclusion, it is true that
the
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some
countries
 have more luck than others in
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a vareity
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vareity
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variety
 of
field
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.
This
 should concern
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all nations globally and make them
to
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unite and find
soultions
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solutions
 to migrate poverty and help to
strength
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 the weak
countries
 for the sake of humanity.
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