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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones.why is this the case ? Do you think this is positive or negative development?

#children #hours #smartphones #case #development
Smartphones
is
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 a part of
parcel
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 in our daily
life
. Having used
smartphones
,
its
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help
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helps
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 to gain some information but there
is
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also
 drawbacks too. Using too
much
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many smartphones
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smartphone
 is a negative matter which is harmful
for
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body
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the body
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 and mind. There are various reasons why
children
 are spending a huge amount of
time
by
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using
smartphones
. The primary one is
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our
 daily
life
 too much rely on
smartphones
.
Since
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 morning to
night
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 we could do all
task
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tasks
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 on
smartphones
.
For instance
, by using
smartphones
,
children
 can easily learn about their
study
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studies
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. What is more,
children
 can do better perform by using
internet
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the internet
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 on
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their smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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. They are achieved science knowledge, thesis or project and curiosity things.
In addition
, social
media
,
which
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is
a
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another great
reasons
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reason
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 why
children
are spent
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have spent
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 too much
tome
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time
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 on
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the smartphone
a smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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.
Young
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 generation often
like
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likes
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 to spend their
time
 using social platforms. They
uploads
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upload
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 photos, videos that are personal or
work related
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work-related
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 and blogs.
A
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 best example is Facebook, which is
largest
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the largest
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 platform in social
media
, Instagram, where people
are
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often share their photos and videos and Twitter, which is a
paltform
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platform
 where
children
 find
their
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interesting and fascinating things and
as a result
, they are spending more hours every day on social
media
.
Firstly
, if
a
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students are spending too much
time
 on
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their smartphone
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smartphone
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smartphones
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, they could be affected
various
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by various
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 diseases like
headache
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headaches
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 and
eyepiece
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eyepieces
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.
A recent
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 statistics reported that
,
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 those who are affected
using
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by using
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smartphone
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smartphones
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,
they
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are less productive rather than
who
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those who
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 do not use
smartphones
 too much.
In addition
, it is unhealthy in
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terms
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 of social development and skill
nad
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and
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 later on, when they
are
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coming
in
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into
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 practical
life
 they failed to
proved
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 themselves. In conclusion,
smartphones
 is a necessary element in our daily
life
.
However
, using social
media
 and
internet
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the internet
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 are
main
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the main
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 reasons why
children
are used
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have used
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smartphones
 more hours every day.
Headache
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Headaches
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 and
failed
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failure
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 in real
life
 are the negative sides of
smartphones
.
Children
 should maintain their
time
 in order to
success
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succeed
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 in
life
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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