Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are bet or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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these days. There is a common assumption among some people, that teenagers should study all subjects, Others, believe that it is preferable to select one major subject to concentrate on. In
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I will explore both those views
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to learn all subjects. focusing on a primary field of
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interest
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undoubtedly
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load of homework and assignments
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and releases him from the pressure to be perfect and achieve high grades in all fields,
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his full potential. In Sweden
for example
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and was declared as highly effective for the students and proved to be effective even in later stages of
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contrast, Many people believe, myself included, that at
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age, those teenagers should be exposed to all the subjects, since it is best to enable them to try and gain a wide range of experiences.
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developing an identity, teaches them how to become more independent, and how
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to handle multitasking, failures and other negative situations that they will need to face later in
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what
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interests
interest
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life
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, they learn how to plan a backup plan, unlike the first approach that sometimes, many teens realize that they did a mistake, and want to change
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direction in
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can be very appealing to try, but eventually, it can
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a
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life
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that is
why it is better at
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age to encourage them to explore by themselves, what is the right path for them to take in
this
world.
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