The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The line graph elucidates the changes in figures between 1987 and 2007 regarding visitors in various areas in a European country.
Overall
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, the
number
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of tourists in the surveyed nation indicated an upward trend, in which water views gained the most
popularity
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during the span of surveyed years, compared to mountain sites. The coast was the most favoured spot among oversea visitors most of the time, the
number
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underwent a surge since 1992 from 35
thousand
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to over 70
thousand
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in 2007. Compared to those visiting the lakes, which experienced a consistent growth since 1987 from 10
thousand
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to 70
thousand
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in 2002 which surpassed that of the coast. Ever since the density of foreign visitors at lakes showed a drastic dropped and dragged the
number
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to 50
thousand
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in 2007.
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, the population of those who visited the mountains from oversea displayed a stable increase over time, starting at 20
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in 1987, the
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went up to 15
thousand
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within 20 years.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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