You are planning to take a vacation. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter: describe the vacation spot you have chosen explain how you plan to spend your time there invite your friend to join you on your vacation.

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Dear smith, I hope

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letter finds you well and in good spirits. I have some thrilling news to share, I am planning a vacation to

swat valley

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Swat Valley

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. I can’t help but extend an invitation for you to join me. Swat

valley

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Valley

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is a breathtaking destination, it is known as the Switzerland of Pakistan because of its

snow capped

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snow-capped

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mountains and lush green landscape, and vibrant local culture make it an ideal escape from the daily hustle. I am planning to spend a week enjoying the blend of nature with culture and engaging in various adventurous activities like hiking

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apply

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skiing and scuba diving that are hard to resist. I am

exited

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excited

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about the prospects of discovering new places and creating

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last

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lasting

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memories. So,what do you say? I would love for you to join me on

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adventure. Your company would make the trip even more special, and I am sure you will have a fantastic time together. Think it over, and

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let

me know your thoughts. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Wishing you all the best, Shahid

shahidumer01 Sat Jan 27 2024

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coherence cohesion

Make sure to use a clear and logical structure throughout the letter. While the current structure is mostly clear, there can still be enhancements in transitions and flow between ideas

coherence cohesion

Maintain the focus on a single idea per paragraph to enhance readability and organization. Try not to introduce multiple ideas within the same paragraph.

task achievement

For task achievement, include more specific details about what makes Swat Valley an enticing choice and how exactly you plan to spend your time there. Providing vivid descriptions and concrete plans can enrich the content of your letter.

task achievement

The tone of the letter is appropriate and friendly, inviting your friend to join you on the vacation, which suits the writing task well. However, taking care to ensure the tone is consistent throughout the letter will help in maintaining engagement.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

182 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

breathtaking scenery
cultural landmarks
itinerary
accommodations
excursions
gastronomic delights
leisure activities
unwind and relax
off the beaten track
once-in-a-lifetime experience
picturesque
explore
local cuisine
adventure
bonding
create memories
companionship
escapade
serenity
revitalize

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