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Some people believe that online study is more effective that on campus while others disagree. Discuss both the disadvantages and advantages of online study.

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Some people believe that online study is more effective than on campus when
this
 method becomes popular.
This
 essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks of
this
 trend. On the one hand, there are several reasons why studying online is beneficial. One of the main advantages of
this
 is convenience.
This
 method can be beneficial for students who want to spend
time
 studying when they have jobs. It provides the flexibility to organize
time
 and space, they can study at their home with their schedule.
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, I
have
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registered
to
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for
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English
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 class in 4 weeks, but the schedule
on campus
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 coincides with the roster of my work, so learning through Zoom with flexible
time
help
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helps
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 me adapt easily
work
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 and study balance. Another factor can be that it’s easy to access
with
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apply
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learning resources. When studying on campus, it takes
time
 for students to find books and documents in the library but with online courses, they can approach more quickly the huge resources of online documents through websites,
links
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.
In addition
, using online tools helps them develop technology skills those very useful in life.
On the other hand
, there are a number of disadvantages of online learning that people should take
consideration
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. One
obviously
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 drawback is technical issues. Internet connection, audio,
video
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and video
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are interacted
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while
 they are studying, or sometimes, devices are broken so they can attend
in
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apply
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class. Another negative effect is that spending too much
time
 in front of
screen
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a screen
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 can cause
physicals
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 problems
such
 as
headache
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headaches
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, tired eyes, etc. In conclusion, learning online could bring about certain benefits , but its negative consequences should not be overlooked. Students should consider which method
suitable
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is suitable
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 for their goals and needs.
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