You have just an article in a national newspaper which claims that town centres in your country all look very similar to each other you don't fully agree with this opinion Write a letter to the editor of the newspaper in your letter say which points in the article you about explain ways in which year Town Centre is different from most other towns centres offer to give a guided tour of your Town Centre to the writer of the article

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Dear Sir or Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing
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to express my disappointment about some parts of the article, which you published in your newspaper
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week. The article was about town centres in my country, India. I agree with most of the information
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as the presence of Ganesh idols in the middle, which are usually surrounded by small flower pots.
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, we do have a local bus stand, a small garden and a landscape painting of the scenery. Most of the cities have the same structure,
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, my town is a bit unique.
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,
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waiting for the bus, we have benches installed for the individuals.
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, we have a small cafe which plays live music and entertains the visitors.
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, our city has a small kids zone where children could play games
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as box cricket, badminton, and table tennis. Would you be kind enough to pay a visit to my town? I would be happy to guide you and show you various interesting parts of my city. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Anjali Patel
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