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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time? To what extend do you agree or disagree.

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It is argued that learning a foreign
language
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 is not necessary because computer translation is quicker and more accurate. I completely disagree with that statement because the availability of technological devices and speaking a foreign
language
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 is providing natural conversation with people. Using technological devices
such
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 as smartphones, and computers to translate is not always possible. When we are doing our presentation in
front
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 of an audience in other languages, it is not preferable to check all the time phone and to watch the means of those words.
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, during our ,meetings we can not use Google translate and it will affect our charisma in
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 of the boss and colleagues.
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, when students do their assignments in
front
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 of their classmates in different languages, they need to study words or phrases that they are going to use for their speech in
front
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 of the tutor as well. Searching for words' meanings will lower their scores. Another reason why learning a
language
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 is beneficial is giving us the possibility to have nice conversations with our international friends. Especially, nowadays, we are connecting a lot to the internet to have friendships online and meet with people who were raised in another
language
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.
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, talking with them in their mother tongue
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 to connect and understand them better and easily.
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, using every one or two minutes during the chat might be disrespectful to our speaking partner. In conclusion, in some ,cases we will not be able to use translators and the best way to contact our overseas friends is by learning their languages not interrupting every minute for meanings. I,
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, strongly disagree with that statement.

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task response
Ensure to directly answer the essay prompt in the introduction and formulate a clear thesis statement about your stance on the topic.
coherence cohesion
Build stronger transitions between paragraphs to enhance the overall flow of ideas and improve coherence. Ensure that each paragraph develops a specific point that is clearly connected to the main argument.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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