Because of the negative effects on health of an inactive lifestyle, all university students and school children should be forced to do sports activities at least 3 times per week. Do you agree? Write your argumentative essay.
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Todays
world Change to a genitive case
Today's
mostly
of people Correct your spelling
most
lifestyle
are
moderately inactive . in my Change the verb form
is
opinion
the peoples are not active Add a comma
,opinion
becuase
of Correct your spelling
because
the
work style and Change the word
their
there
environmental Replace the word
their
condition
. nowadays people don't have time to do Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
excercise
even walking and running.Correct your spelling
exercise
in
the Correct your spelling
In
pelow
paragraph Correct your spelling
below
let
see Add a missing verb
let's
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the consequence
consequence
regarding Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
on
it.
To commence with , there are a number of arguments in favour of my belief. the most prominent one is that the university and schools Change preposition
apply
deberatively
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deliberatively
concerntrating
physical education.In order Correct your spelling
concentrating
maintain
student interest campus will provide some facilities like Fix the infinitive
to maintain
gym
, indoor play court , Correct article usage
a gym
swimming
pool to concentrate cardio. in my Correct word choice
and swimming
thinking
mainly proper use will Add a comma
,thinking
tends
to move forward Change the verb form
tend
for
Change preposition
toward
healthy
life.Add an article
a healthy
Moreover
our folks have some habits like playing with friends in Add a comma
,Moreover
thier
leisure time.
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their
on the other hand
, critics may piont
out that Correct your spelling
point
on
of the most significant disadvantages of the inactive Correct your spelling
one
lifestyle
is that
not utilizing all the Correct word choice
apply
faclities
properly . Nowadays Correct your spelling
facilities
lifestyle
totally changed Fix the agreement mistake
lifestyles
lot
after the pandemic people are met Add an article
a lot
regular
, Change the word
regularly
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and every
every one
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everyone
have
own Change the verb form
has
scenerio
to do unactive work like playing Correct your spelling
scenario
game
full day and Fix the agreement mistake
games
skeeping
whatever time etc.For Correct your spelling
keeping
sleeping
that
we need to monitor the Add a comma
,that
activties
to overcome Correct your spelling
activities
this
issues. For Correct determiner usage
these
insance
, a survey conducted in the united states reveals that making the schedule for educating Correct your spelling
instance
the
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apply
physicall
education Correct your spelling
physical
importance
to all the Replace the word
important
student
and Fix the agreement mistake
students
also
providing seperate
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separate
mentor
or Fix the agreement mistake
mentors
coach
to Fix the agreement mistake
coaches
guidence
the students. Correct your spelling
guidance
guide
Eventhough
universities Correct your spelling
Even though
strugging
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struggling
for
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with
these issue
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this issue
these issues
so that
they Correct word choice
apply
planned
to Wrong verb form
plan
overcome
.
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themovercome
To conclude
, even when there is
are Unnecessary verb
apply
lot
of demerits associated with Change the article
a lot
the
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apply
in
active Correct your spelling
an
lifestyle
. the advanges
outweigh the Correct your spelling
advantages
disadavnages
, and Correct your spelling
disadvantages
active
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an active
lifestyle
has become a crucial part of our life. Therefore
efficient uses of all facilies
provided by the universities to decrease the Correct your spelling
facilities
inactice
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inactive
active
lifestyle
should be promoted.however
,its misuse should be condemmed
. in my Correct your spelling
condemned
beliew
, the universities taken Correct your spelling
belief
decision
is Replace the word
decided
better
way to run the healthy lifeAdd an article
a better
the better
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