In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some nations, people are getting heavier and standards of health and wellbeing are falling.
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essay will suggest that the principal cause of these issues is the type of nourishment they are eating and submit a government education program as a viable solution, followed by a reasoned conclusion.
On the one hand, the main cause of the health crisis currently affecting so many individuals is the over-consumption of poor-quality sustenance. Convenience Linking Words
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as microwave dinners, chocolate bars, McDonald’s and pizza, have become a ubiquitous part of modern life. Eating too much of these high-fat meals causes many to gain weight and Linking Words
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, the movie ‘Super Size Me’ demonstrated that a person who eats Linking Words
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things as raised blood pressure and even fatty liver disease.
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problem is a government-sponsored awareness campaign. An effective advertising campaign could warn of the dangers of a poor diet and hopefully, raise awareness amongst the public. Linking Words
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raised awareness of the problem would lead many people to start a healthier regime. Linking Words
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, the U.K. recently lobbied their citizens to eat 5 pieces of fruit and vegetables a day and Linking Words
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as stroke and heart disease.
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by educating men and women on how to make healthier choices.Linking Words
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