The diagram shows how the rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in Australia.
The diagram demonstrates how rainwater has been gathered and purified to be utilized as drinking
water
in Australia. Overall
, it is evident that the procedure is not exceedingly difficult. The rainfall drains and flows down the pipe before being distributed to individual homes for consumption.
Every residence has two pipelines, one for fresh water
and the other for collecting rainwater. Raindrops were first transported to the water
filter and then
sent through the tube to be kept. Second,
it went through a water
treatment in this
procedure, where chemicals that can destroy dangerous germs and dust particles were added. The last
phase was bringing drinking water
to every household. Now, anyone may use it by simply opening the taps in their home, and the water
will flow out and be fit for consumption.
To sum up
, collecting the drained water
at each stage is crucial because it may filter out foreign objects from rainfall to create clean water
suitable for usage.Submitted by nueynueyy
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