You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having a party. Give directions on how to get to the venue. Suggest how you can accommodate him/her.

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Dear John, How're you? I hope

this

letter finds you well in health and spirits. I'm writing

this

letter to invite you to my promotion party which will be held on 25 May 2023 at Green Park Hotel, Sydney. Here I would like to share my feeling with you.

Firstly

, I tell you some great news regarding my career achievement that I recently get during my hard work

as well as

showing better performance in the company projects. That's why I can get receive a reward and uplift my position in organizations. Because of

this

news, I have been throwing a party for my loved ones and colleagues.

Furthermore

, I have organized a celebration in a famous hotel

that is

located in the centre of my town which is approximately 45 kilometres far away from your home.

Moreover

, you will reach

this

location by the main highway from Melbourne to Sydney after that you will take the first left and reach the party venue. All in all, I suggest you will live in my apartment rather than will a hotel room for you because on that day the weather is uncontrol as I heard from the weather forecast. So, I will recommend you will live in my area when the weather is not clear. Hope to see you soon. With regards, Eva.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

222 words

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