You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having a party. Give directions on how to get to the venue. Suggest how you can accommodate him/her.

Dear John, How're you? I hope

this

letter finds you well in health and spirits. I'm writing

this

letter to invite you to my promotion party which will be held on 25 May 2023 at Green Park Hotel, Sydney. Here I would like to share my feeling with you.

Firstly

, I tell you some great news regarding my career achievement that I recently get during my hard work

as well as

showing better performance in the company projects. That's why I can get receive a reward and uplift my position in organizations. Because of

this

news, I have been throwing a party for my loved ones and colleagues.

Furthermore

, I have organized a celebration in a famous hotel

that is

located in the centre of my town which is approximately 45 kilometres far away from your home.

Moreover

, you will reach

this

location by the main highway from Melbourne to Sydney after that you will take the first left and reach the party venue. All in all, I suggest you will live in my apartment rather than will a hotel room for you because on that day the weather is uncontrol as I heard from the weather forecast. So, I will recommend you will live in my area when the weather is not clear. Hope to see you soon. With regards, Eva.

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8 paragraphs

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You are having a party and want to invite your friend from a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: Describe why you are having a party. Give directions on how to get to the venue. Suggest how you can accommodate him/her.

Scientists tell us some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that millions of people continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions?

1.Very year an increasing number of people suffer from fast food related diseases. The government, therefore, should impose a high tax on fast food. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the goverment ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?