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Eating out has both positive and negative aspects. What are they? Why? Develop State your position using examples and reasons.

There are advantages and disadvantages of eating out. First and the most essential advantage of eating out is
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 saving. As a full-
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 worker and a manager of the finance department, I usually struggle with
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-saving. It is definitely not easy to find any free
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 for cooking.In
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 issue comes to help my favourite
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 Aladdin. The dishes of
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restaurant
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 are extremely delicious and
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 located in a convenient place in the city. The service of the
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 is
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 excellent and convenient for some gatherings and parties. I usually visit
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 alone but sometimes we celebrate there some holidays with colleagues and family. The second positive side of eating out is you can avoid a monotonous style of dinner. In a
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, I usually choose dissimilar dishes every
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.I
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 prefer to order dishes which I can not cook at home whether it is
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-consuming or meals which require elaborate ingredients. In my point of view, the only disadvantage of choosing a
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 is that it costs a lot of
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.The
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 which I prefer is not the luxurious one even though sometimes it costs me a quarter of my salary. It is
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great
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 and I could save it if I have chosen to eat at home.
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, during my vacation
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 or weekends, I save a lot of
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 rather than working days. In conclusion, eating out has several advantages like saving
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 and a wide range of choices .The only disadvantage is costing a lot of
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.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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