Are there more advantages to living in a city than in the country? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Facilities
avilable
in the urban areas Correct your spelling
available
is
attracting more and more people to live in.I personally prefer to stay in metro cities over villages Correct subject-verb agreement
are
beacuse
of Correct your spelling
because
Correct article usage
the numbers
numbers
of advantages it provides. Fix the agreement mistake
number
Reasons
for my belief are Correct article usage
The reasons
explianed
in the following paragraphs.
Metropolitian provides many Correct your spelling
explained
opportunity
.First and foremost, Change to a plural noun
opportunities
chances
of getting a good job are quite as compared to Correct article usage
the chances
suburbs
because of lots of Correct article usage
the suburbs
well established
industries and corporates in these areas which not only Add a hyphen
well-established
offers
work but Correct subject-verb agreement
offer
also
handsome
salary.To add on, the mole culture developed in cities has made shopping easier as residents can buy their needs from Correct article usage
a handsome
one
stop which inturn
helps Correct your spelling
in turn
saving
time. In villages there Wrong verb form
save
its
difficult to find happy-to-go places Replace the word
it's
it is
while
in urban
Add an article
the urban
an urban
area
Fix the agreement mistake
areas
one
can find many multiplexes, amusement parks, shopping
malls Correct word choice
and shopping
those
are so big that they can enjoy a full day. Correct pronoun usage
that
For instance
, newly
opened Science Correct article usage
the newly
City
in Ahmedabad City
containing a 3D theater
, a zoo and park and a mall attracts nearly 5000 visitors in a single day.
Another prominent reason is Change the spelling
theatre
highly
developed Correct article usage
the highly
infrastrcture
in Correct your spelling
infrastructure
city
Add an article
the city
area
. The quality of road
is very high Add an article
the road
as
compared to Correct word choice
apply
outskirts
, Correct article usage
the outskirts
along with
quality, widened roadways provides ease of driving commuters. Very well designed accomodation
is Correct your spelling
accommodation
one
more reason for the preference. Houses built with latest
technology Change the article
the latest
such
as one click
open and close button for Add a hyphen
one-click
house
, Add an article
the house
a house
shock proof
pillars,Correct your spelling
shockproof
a
design Correct word choice
and a
that is
ecologically viable attracts
Correct subject-verb agreement
attract
large
number of people. Change the article
a large
the large
For example
, recently
Correct article usage
the recently
inaugrated
Adani Correct your spelling
inaugurated
City
Raw house provides houses with latest
functionalities Correct article usage
the latest
such
as mobile controlled
doors, Add a hyphen
mobile-controlled
fire proof
walls, Correct your spelling
fireproof
audio based
lights that Add a hyphen
audio-based
Add a missing verb
are on-off
on-off on
voice command.
Add a hyphen
on-off-on
To conclude
, though there are certain cons in living in a city
area
but
its pros are overriding it. For the reasons cited Remove the conjunction
apply
above
I choose to stay in an urban Add a comma
,above
area
rather than a village area
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