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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays, the development of
information
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 technology has significantly increased over the
last
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 decades, and many
people
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 prefer to receive
information
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 from the
Internet
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 rather than from newspapers or TV programs. From my point of view,
this
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 change has as positive as negative aspects, and in the following essay, I will explain why. On the one hand, the
Internet
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 provides quick access to a wide range of
information
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 on various requests for different purposes. To access the world
news
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,
people
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 need only a reliable
internet
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 connection and choose the source of
information
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.
For instance
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,
people
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 can get every type of
news
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 by picking up their smartphones, opening a
news
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 app or Google search engine, and finding interesting
information
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.
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, the
Internet
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 helps
people
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 to keep their fingers on the pulse.
On the other hand
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,
people
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 may face incorrect, fake
information
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 or scammers, so
people
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 need to select trustworthy and legal
information
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sources
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 and be responsible for
this
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.
Moreover
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, many
information
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sources
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 on the
Internet
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 don't rank or filter
information
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according to
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 the degrees of cruelty, which can lead to increased stress levels among readers.
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, if something terrible happens in the world and
this
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 accident is close to a reader, the reader starts to search for any
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 about it and can't stop.
As a result
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,
people
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 surrounded by informational noise may suffer from permanent anxiety and will force to turn to psychologists to deal with nervousness. In conclusion,
people
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 should be more responsible for choosing informational
sources
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 and avoid illegal
sources
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 to save money and mental health. At the same time, the
Internet
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 gives
people
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 heaps of beneficial
information
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 in their pockets and keeps them up to date with the
news
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. I consider that it is wrong to lose the benefits that the
Internet
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 is provided.
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