The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the changing
of
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population
rates in different countries from 1910 to 2010.
Overall
, Asia has the greatest population
in both years whereas
Latin America
, Africa, North America
and others remained the lowest rate of all in the same period. Furthermore
, there was a growing population
in Latin America
, Africa, North America
and others although
there was a slight decline in Europe and Asia population
in the same period.
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To begin
with, in 1910, Asia has the majority of population
in 1910 and 2010. It started with a large proportion of 60% and it slightly dropped to 54% in 2010. Correct pronoun usage
its population
Moreover
, the second-greatest proportion was in Europe in the meantime. To explain more, the population
rate of Europe moderately fell from exactly a quarter to a small portion of 14%.
However
, the minority of population
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the population
America
, Africa, North America
and others in 1910 and 2010. The proportion was a small fraction of 15% in 1910 and then
it almost doubled to 32% by the end of the period.Submitted by mai.nabeil46 on
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