The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two pie charts below show changes in world population by region between 1910 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The given charts illustrate the changing
of
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population
rates in different countries from 1910 to 2010.
Overall
, Asia has the greatest
population
in both years
whereas
Latin
America
, Africa, North
America
and others remained the lowest rate of all in the same period.
Furthermore
, there was a growing
population
in Latin
America
, Africa, North
America
and others
although
there was a slight decline in Europe and Asia
population
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populations
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in the same period.
To begin
with, in 1910, Asia has the majority of
population
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in 1910 and 2010. It started with a large proportion of 60% and it slightly dropped to 54% in 2010.
Moreover
, the second-greatest proportion was in Europe in the meantime. To explain more, the
population
rate of Europe moderately fell from exactly a quarter to a small portion of 14%.
However
, the minority of
population
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was in Latin
America
, Africa, North
America
and others in 1910 and 2010. The proportion was a small fraction of 15% in 1910 and
then
it almost doubled to 32% by the end of the period.
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