some people believe that the best way to deal with heavy traffic in city centres is for privately owned vehicles to be banned, others however think this is not a realistic solution.

Living in the modern era is always fascinating to other people who lived in undeveloped countries. The high life of developed cities demands complete infrastructure where there is no issue of energy crises
as well as
travelling problems.
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are the key points to highlight the causes
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the government
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of developed countries provided travelling facilities to their citizens.
Such
kind of facilities not only support public
transport
but
also
plays a major role in reducing
traffic
on the roads. Public
transport
which includes trains and buses will automatically cover up the private
transport
system and
in
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this
will bring up the solution to deal with heavy
traffic
in
city
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the city
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center
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. There will be many other assumptions which
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to
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that
this
is not a realistic approach to deal with it. The
authorites
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authorities
may announce that no heavy
traffic
is allowed in
city
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center
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and only public
transport
have
the
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access to enter
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that specific area.
Moreover
, if
this
rule is being followed by the citizens so that could create a big impact on the
city
center
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. There is a growing consensus that public
transport
will minimise
the
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heavy
traffic
and there are several reasons for
this
. One of the main reasons is
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the diversion
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of the heavy
traffic
from the
city
center
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. It is undeniable that air pollution has a negative impact on public health and
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appyling
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applying
ban on private
trasnport
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transport
will definitely enhance the health sector. In conclusion, there are many advantages of public
transport
in
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comparison
to private
transport
which results in
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eco friendly
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and healthy atmosphere. Those who think that
this
is not a realistic approach should follow the steps which are good for a healthy environment.
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