Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Trees

in the

city

are playing important roles. Some people believe that if there are any empty spaces in the

city

,

trees

should be planted

while

others say that building more houses there would be a better idea. I completely disagree with the idea of having more houses in a vacant area of the

city

. Building new facilities in the margin space of the

city

might worsen the environment. As the numbers of buildings and houses increase, population density increases as well.

As a result

of

this

situation, the use of electricity will considerably boost and ,

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the amount of carbon dioxide emitted significantly increase. The air of the

city

would be polluted, which would cause severe illness in people’s lungs.

On the other hand

, if there are

trees

planted in the

city

, the

city

can stay as an eco-friendly space since they could prevent the

city

from being overpopulated.

Secondly

, the

city

is no longer a safe space for children and their

parents

. As more facilities are extended, there is no doubt that the

city

would be a busy place.

Consequently

, the number of vehicles on the street drastically increases and thereby it would not be a safe place for kids.

For instance

,

parents

have to pay extra attention when they are walking with their kids.

This

must be very stressful for

parents

especially those who have more than one child. In conclusion, some claim that the

city

should have more housing in its vacant area

whereas

, others believe that planting

trees

in

such

places would be way better. I disagree with the idea of filling the blanks with more facilities. The reasons are it would affect the environment negatively and the

parents

would get a huge pressure to walk in the

city

with their kids.