Some people think that sport teaches children how to compete, while others believe that children learn teamwork. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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in the

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are playing important roles. Some people believe that if there are any empty spaces in the

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,

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should be planted

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others say that building more houses there would be a better idea. I completely disagree with the idea of having more houses in a vacant area of the

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. Building new facilities in the margin space of the

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might worsen the environment. As the numbers of buildings and houses increase, population density increases as well.

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situation, the use of electricity will considerably boost and ,

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the amount of carbon dioxide emitted significantly increase. The air of the

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would be polluted, which would cause severe illness in people’s lungs.

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, if there are

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planted in the

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, the

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can stay as an eco-friendly space since they could prevent the

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from being overpopulated.

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, the

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is no longer a safe space for children and their

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. As more facilities are extended, there is no doubt that the

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would be a busy place.

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, the number of vehicles on the street drastically increases and thereby it would not be a safe place for kids.

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have to pay extra attention when they are walking with their kids.

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must be very stressful for

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especially those who have more than one child. In conclusion, some claim that the

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should have more housing in its vacant area

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, others believe that planting

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places would be way better. I disagree with the idea of filling the blanks with more facilities. The reasons are it would affect the environment negatively and the

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would get a huge pressure to walk in the

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with their kids.