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In many workplaces, online communication is now more common than face to face meetings. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays, the way to work has been changing. More and more
people
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 work from home or even from another country.
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,
communication
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 means are different from before, and workers have more online
communication
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 than personal meetings.
This
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 essay will explore why online communications are more satisfactory than face-to-face meetings. On the one hand, online
communication
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 could be a benefit because it does not matter the distance,
people
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 can talk wherever they are, and it is not necessary to transport them anywhere. Having an online meeting is really fast; it only requires touching a button (with a single click) and instantly being in contact.
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, workers can turn on the camera and microphone and see each other.
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, a positive thing about
this
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 kind of meeting is that it can be recorded, and workers can repeat it as many times as they need.
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,
people
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 must find a comfortable and silent place to have a quiet conversation, free of distractions and annoying noises.
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,
people
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 need a stable internet connection too. They must have a good one because if it goes wrong, the meeting could be a disaster, and
communication
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 will become problematic.
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 type of inconvenience could affect the exchange of information between employees and employers. In conclusion,
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 online communications can sometimes be unclear, in general, it brings about significant benefits. In my opinion, online communications are better than face-to-face meetings because
people
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 do not need to stay in the same place simultaneously.
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