IN SOME AREAS UNIVERSITY STUDENTS LIVE FAR AWAY FROM THEIR HOME DURING THEIR STUDIES. DO YOU THINK THE DISADVANTAGES OUTWEIGH THE ADVANTAGES OF LIVING IN ANOTHER CITY ?

Today
its
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very
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common issue .
Its
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better
than
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to live far away from
home
then
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to stay at
home
with
parents
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. There are plus and minus sides. There are many conveniences to stay at
home
. It's more economical for students. Students don't spend much money
for
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accommodation and food . And they are free to
cleaning
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or
cooking
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other like
this
activities. Because their mothers do
home
activities
instead
of them. The
the
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disadvantage sides are they spend
much
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time
to attend to
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university
or
home
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at home
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. And their siblings may make noise that during they doing homework .
To live
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near
to
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the
university
has many advantages.
University
give
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a chance that the
culture
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exchange suddenly
happen
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after the class hours. You can
also
participate in
like
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these activities. In that time you stayed at
home
, you lose a big chance. If you
near
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to
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the campus you can go
good
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to good
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facility
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facilities
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libraries, modern computers etc. And the disadvantage is that you stay
the
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same
aprtment
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apartment
with someone that you don't know. To my
mind
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it's quite good to live at
university
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a university
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because you can get many facilities like meeting with tourists or gyms
stadiums
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and stadiums
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.
To sum up
it has many benefits to live near to the
university
.
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