The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main featurues, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Carribean island between 2010 and 2017.

Summarise the infromation by selecting and reporting the main featurues, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given
line
chart serves the data about how many
visitors
came to a Caribbean island in seven years. By and large, it is clear from the chart that the total of tourists increased every
year
.
On the other hand
, among the total, there are two lines that fluctuated. Even though there was a slight decrease in it in 2016, the
line
of total
visitors
shows constantly grew from 2010 to 2015 (1-2.5 hundred).
Moreover
, after a slight drop in the previous
year
, the
line
went back to the up trend in 2017 and reach the peak of the number of tourists (3.5
million
).
Furthermore
, The
visitors
who came and stayed on cruise ships rose to 0.5
million
in 2011 but dropped to around 0.1
million
in the following
year
.
However
, in the next
year
, it increased to 1
million
and continue the trend until the end of the period with 2
million
visitors
. The
last
line
is the one for
visitors
who were staid on the island. It first went down from around 0.7 to 0.6
million
in 2011 but rose significantly in 2013 (1.5
million
). The number was stable until 2015 when it dropped to 1.4 but after that slightly rose to 1.5 in 2017.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, visitors, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slight" was used 3 times.
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