As computers are being used more and more in education, there will soon be no role for the teacher in the classroom. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As computers are being accepted more and more in

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system, there will soon be no role for the

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instructors

in the

schools

. I totally disagree with

this

statement because

teachers

can identify

children

's

necesities

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necessities

and

tutors

can motivate them to reach their educational goals in life. One reason that I disagree with

this

statement is that

teachers

as human beings have the ability to give

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individual attention to their

students

and perceive what help they need. More importantly, it is common that many teens have issues with math or reading and the

tutors

could address

this

situation;

however

, not all the

students

present

this

situation so is important to have a human being to be able to classify their own necessities.

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, in The United States, most

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elementary

schools

hire

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tutors

to provide tutoring support after school to help those

children

who have issues in math or reading. Another reason that I disagree is that

tutors

function as

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of inspiration for many

children

because they motivate them to complete their daily

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assignments

and

persue

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pursue

their educational goals.

Therefore

,

tutors

are

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seen

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as role models who inspired young

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to become the best version

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their lives.

Also

, many of these

teachers

help

children

to learn how to play a musical instrument to help them to acquire social skills. To explain

further

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middle

schools

have musical programs that teach

children

to play

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, flute or piano that help them to feel more secure and smart

students

. In conclusion,

teachers

are vital to keep in our society because they help our

children

to become better

students

and become self-confident, so they are not going to disappear because their function at

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incomparable with computers.