You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter; Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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Dear

sir

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/madam, I am writing

this

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letter to buy a

house

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in Milton Keynes, United

kingdom

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Kingdom

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. I am Rohini, recently I have got a job in

Ayelsbury

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Aylesbury

. So I am planning to move with my family. My two children and my husband will

also

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come with me to

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the UK

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. I need your help to buy a

house

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in Milton Keynes.

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, I am looking for a

3 bedroom

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independent villa.

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, a fully furnished

house

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could be a better option as I may not get sufficient time to buy all the furniture.

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, it will be good if it has a patio and garden area.

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to that, it should have a parking space as I was thinking I will be buying a car after two months.

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, I have got a job in

Ayelesbury

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Aylesbury

, So it will be nice if you can arrange a

house

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in and around

Ayelsburry

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Aylesbury

. Because I don’t want to move far away from my job location.It will be a great help if you can find any

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apply

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such

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house

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. Thank you for

consideration

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your consideration

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. I will be waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, XYZ.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

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191 words

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