Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

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Today, we can see a big amount of people suffering from
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. It is a great problem nowadays, so let's find out
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possible reasons
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that and what can be done in order to help people.
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let's talk about problems which can cause
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lack of sleep. In my opinion, one of the reasons may be stress. You know, practically
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different people face some problems and
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to think about those problems all
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long, of course, they become nervous about it as well. I know that feeling, you are just thinking about it all the time and can'
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relax. The second issue
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may be
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coffee, because of one unique
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in it. What else? I am pretty sure it might be jet lag or the
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sleep.
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, the noisy humans around you, so it isn'
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that easy to fall asleep.
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, let's
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had a bad
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then
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just take it easy. There is no problem you can'
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handle, so just relax, do what you like, maybe
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routine, take a warm bath with some aroma candles, drink hot mint tea, read some cute book, and DON'
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think about anything bad.
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, if you have stress, I would recommend you
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talk with a doctor.
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, don'
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take a nap in the middle of the
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,
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just go for a walk. Do some
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activities. If you have some noisy humans around you, just ask them to shut up. So
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everything, don'
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think about
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, try to see something positive in everything.
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, talk with somebody. Don'
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overthink
and just enjoy
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beautiful life. Sweet dreams to you!
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Insomnia
  • Sleep deprivation
  • Sleep disorders
  • Sleep quality
  • Fatigue
  • Exhaustion
  • Restless
  • Restorative sleep
  • REM sleep
  • Circadian rhythm
  • Sleep hygiene
  • Napping
  • Sleep duration
  • Melatonin
  • Sleep-inducing
  • Drowsiness
  • Sleep disturbances
  • Obstructive sleep apnea
  • Snoring
  • Sleepwalking
  • Sleep talking
  • Shift work
  • Sleeping pills
  • Sleep aid
  • Relaxation techniques
  • Meditation
  • Deep breathing
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