Some people believe that advertising has a strong effect on a person's decision making process. Others feel that it has little or no real impact. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
Companies are increasing their marketing budgets to showcase more advertisements compared to previous decades.
While
some may believe that adverts strongly influence decisions, others declare that the impact is either minor or not at all. This
essay will argue why adverts definitely have a major effect when it comes to considering things.
Many people do not acknowledge that adverts can make changes to our thinking process. Since marketing is conducted on various forms of channels, they simply ignore the idea, brand or product that is
showcased. While
commuting between destinations, the observation of such
displays is minimal nowadays due to
mobile phones. For instance
, a person may skip past billboards or banners of a company because they are focused on the route. This
could be the reason behind this
belief.
However
, the process of deciding on something is greatly affected by advertisements. Almost every company prepares a hefty budget for marketing and its strategies. As most organizations know this
is a proven method to expand their name and product line, and studies support the impact on one's thoughts. For example
, there has been proven scientific research that the human brain holds the image it sees for at least a day in the conscious part of the brain. Proven that the act of purchasing, searching or thinking about a product or service has a huge impact.
To summarize, this
essay argues that advertising has a considerable and meaningful part when it comes to deciding upon something. In my opinion, the purpose of advertisements plays an important role in distributing its idea to the masses, even though people may not be consciously absorbing the information, they most certainly think about it at some point.Submitted by Leena Kapoor on
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Task Achievement
Provide a clearer introduction that explicitly states both viewpoints before presenting your own opinion. This will help in setting a clearer context for your discussion.
Coherence and Cohesion
Incorporate diverse linking devices to improve the flow between ideas and paragraphs, such as 'Furthermore,' 'On the other hand,' or 'Consequently.' This will strengthen the coherence of your essay.
Task Achievement
Support your arguments with more detailed examples and evidence, particularly from reputable sources or studies, to enhance credibility and depth in your essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Conclude your essay with a summary that not only reiterates your position but also succinctly encapsulates the discussion of both views. This would provide a more rounded closure to your argument.
Task Achievement
Balance the discussion of both sides more equally by dedicating a similar amount of analysis and detail to the opposing viewpoint.
Your opinion
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