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With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered as they lose their habitat and some are even threatened to the point of extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What measures can be taken to deal with this problem?

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In today's world
people
 face a problem with
animals
' extinction. It is quite common
due to
 logging, unlicensed hunting and urban development. In my opinion, it is essential to protect
animals
. Only humans are responsible for their protection. There are a lot of ways in which
people
 can preserve
animals
. I think governments should bring in the law about the prohibition of illegal hunting and deforestation. In order to deal with the issue, governments can introduce a law where poaching will be forbidden, as these
animals
 are being killed for obtaining materials.
Moreover
, a person, who will break the law, should be punished. On top of that, governments should create places, which will be similar to
animals
' habitats. They should employ
people
 who will take care of endangered species and look after them. Employees can breed
such
animals
, so it will reduce the risk of their extinction.
Secondly
, deforestation should be reduced because of the loss of
animals
' habitats. We all know that
people
 cut trees because they need paper, pencils, materials for building and so on.
In addition
,
people
 build their houses or other man-made constructions,
such
 as factories, schools and so on, in places, where
animals
 live.
Therefore
, I think they should choose areas where inhabitants do not live. In conclusion, I would like to say that it is pivotal to protect
animals
 from extinction, especially endangered species.
People
 should focus on
this
 problem because wildlife is an important part of our nature. We can take several measures to make sure we take care of the
animals
.
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