Some say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some
people
argue that Use synonyms
sports
are essential in Use synonyms
society
, Use synonyms
whereas
others believe that Linking Words
it
can only offer Correct pronoun usage
they
a
relaxation. Correct article usage
apply
This
essay will explain both opinions and why I believe that taking Linking Words
sports
is fundamentally essential to maintain Use synonyms
health
condition.
On the one hand, one of the reasons why Use synonyms
people
argue that Use synonyms
sports
are just a leisure activity is because Use synonyms
one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
such
as golf and horse riding are less tiring compared to other types of Linking Words
sports
. Use synonyms
Consequently
, Linking Words
society
often thinks that it offers nothing Use synonyms
than
relaxation and Correct quantifier usage
more than
only
considered Add a missing verb
is only
as
a part of Change preposition
apply
lifestyle
. Another reason to support the arguments is Add an article
the lifestyle
a lifestyle
Linking Words
due to
the fact that most Change preposition
apply
sports
Use synonyms
activities
require Use synonyms
people
to pay for Use synonyms
the
subscription. Correct article usage
a
For example
, the price for bowling and ice skating tends to be more expensive, which can heavily limit the Linking Words
sports
to several groups of Use synonyms
people
. Use synonyms
As a result
, Linking Words
people
with lower social standing Use synonyms
unable
to afford those Add a missing verb
are unable
activities
, and it is possible for them to see Use synonyms
the
Correct article usage
apply
sports
as only regular hobbies.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, despite the aforementioned arguments, Linking Words
sports
are important for two reasons. Use synonyms
Firstly
, regular Linking Words
sports
Use synonyms
activities
can help to Use synonyms
increase
Use synonyms
health
conditions as the movements tend to burn some calories, which positively impacts the Use synonyms
bodies
. Fix the agreement mistake
body
Although
its level is not as heavy as lifting, taking regular cardio Linking Words
such
as swimming, running, or hiking can result in several benefits, especially in reducing fats and weights. Linking Words
As a result
, it will Linking Words
less
likely for these Add a missing verb
be less
people
to get sick, resulting in a healthier Use synonyms
society
. Use synonyms
Secondly
, modern Linking Words
sports
Use synonyms
activities
can potentially Use synonyms
increase
well-being and mental Use synonyms
health
Use synonyms
condition
since they can establish a positive community. Fix the agreement mistake
conditions
For example
, Linking Words
people
are not only taking yoga and pilates for their Use synonyms
health
Use synonyms
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
to relieve stress as they build a healthy Linking Words
friendship
along the way with the trainer and fellow members. Fix the agreement mistake
friendships
Consequently
, they can effectively aim for work-life balance, Linking Words
as well as
get the benefits to Linking Words
increase
their Use synonyms
health
records.
In conclusion, despite the arguments of how Use synonyms
sports
are only a form of relaxation, I would argue that Use synonyms
sports
are beneficial since they can Use synonyms
increase
physical and mental Use synonyms
health
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, I remain convinced that Linking Words
society
should pursue more Use synonyms
sports
Use synonyms
due to
the potential benefits that it offers.Linking Words
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