thw two pie charts show online shopping sales for retail sectors in Canada in 2005 and 2010.
The given pie chart illustrates the
percentage
of sellers who sell different commodities through the Internet in Canada in 2005 and 2010. In brief, the proportion of the people who sell electronics and something to drink and eat was the highest position, Use synonyms
whereas
the section of the company which handles Home Furnishings and Videogames Linking Words
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occupied the smallest Unnecessary verb
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percentage
.
Moving to the details, the Use synonyms
percentage
of retailers of Electronics and Home Furnishing showed similar patterns, with both slightly Use synonyms
decrease
from 2005 to 2010. In 2005, internet sellers of electronics took up the top position, Wrong verb form
decreasing
then
it dropped from 35% to 30 per cent, and it was overtaken by Food and Beverage in 2010. Linking Words
In addition
, the house-tool vendors who utilized devices for selling was the second largest proportion in 2005 at a quarter, Linking Words
however
its Linking Words
percentage
declined to less than a fifth, and it became the Use synonyms
least
position.
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On the other hand
, the Linking Words
percentage
of online vendors of Food and video Games increased between 2005 and 2010. The section of the food and beverage merchants who exploited the technology was at just over a fifth in 2005, Use synonyms
then
it soared to 32%. Linking Words
Furthermore
, there was a steady rise in the rates of Video game retailers from 18 per cent to 23%.Linking Words
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