You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter ● explain why you find the noise disturbing ● suggest a way to solve the problem ● explain what you will do if the problem is not solved

Dear sir, I live in your
neighborhood
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, which is 7222 Sharon Avenue . I just want to you pay attention to your restaurant noise ,which is coming every day evening time. As a good
neighbour
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I understand
restaurant
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have lots of people ,but it's the noise coming from loud music .I have work early morning every day ,so it's really hard for me to sleep. I just want to request you to keep your music volume low ,others wise I am going to file a complaint against your restaurant.Thank you
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sincerely Aman
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