You live close to a restaurant and have recently been disturbed by the noise coming from the restaurant in the evenings. Write a letter to the owner of the restaurant. In your letter ● explain why you find the noise disturbing ● suggest a way to solve the problem ● explain what you will do if the problem is not solved

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Dear sir, I live in your

neighborhood

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, which is 7222 Sharon Avenue . I just want to you pay attention to your restaurant noise ,which is coming every day evening time. As a good

neighbour

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I understand

restaurant

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have lots of people ,but it's the noise coming from loud music .I have work early morning every day ,so it's really hard for me to sleep. I just want to request you to keep your music volume low ,others wise I am going to file a complaint against your restaurant.Thank you

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sincerely Aman

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

94 words

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