You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

Dear Mrs. Smith, I am writing to you in order to express my decision about do not continue with the
course
. As you know, currently I have a full-time job and
this
is affecting me because I can not do my homework up to date and
also
I was being late for my classes. Lately, I have
a
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lot of work and it is impossible to make some time to study.
Besides
, my car was broken a
couple
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weeks ago so I move
with
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the
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public transport and it takes me two hours to arrive at the place where the
course
is from work. Probably, I will try to do
this
course
next semester. Meanwhile, in my free time, I would like to read and learn with the material that I have and join my friends to discuss it.
Also
, I am investigating if exists any opportunity to do an advanced
course
in the summer.
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you for your attention. Kind regards, Camila
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