Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the locals?

Every day the

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amount

of

tourists

that are going to

places

with harsh conditions is increasing,

places

like the Sahara desert or the cold Antarctic. It could be stated that the

locals

obtain many

advantages

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the

amount

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of

tourists

that they

recieve

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receive

,

however

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some people might have another point of view and could believe that it's a disadvantage for the

locals

. Personally, I believe that

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increasing

tourism

has more

advantages

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it has

disadvantages

. The biggest advantage that

locals

recieve

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receive

from the increasing

tourism

is the significant

amount

of income that they

recieve

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receive

. The Sahara and the Antarctic are

both

located in

places

were

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there isn't much development, and multiple studies have proven that

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less developed countries obtain a huge

amount

of revenue from

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tourism

.

Furthermore

,

both

of these

places

have small

population

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and

for instance

,

locals

can work as

tourists

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guides or

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transport to the visitors.

Tourism

in

both

of these

places

is a significant uplift for their economies.

Nevertheless

,

tourism

can

also

have some major

disadvantages

in

both

of these

places

.

Firstly

, The Sahara desert and the Antarctic are

both

places

with a lot of nature, they are

both

really well preserved, bringing

tourists

might affect

this

. Visitors probably won't care about the preservation of the natural areas and they might throw trash in these

places

. Another example is that the increase

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tourists

would

also

increase the

amount

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of vehicles

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and that would

concequently

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consequently

increase the quantity of

polution

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pollution

in the air.

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,

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nature would be the factor which would

recieve

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receive

disadvantages

from

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the

tourists

.

Overall

, the

locals

from these locations would get

advantages

from

tourism

when talking about economics, revenue and income,

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the other hand

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nature would

recieve

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receive

the

disadvantages

of increasing

tourism

, and

this

also

affects the

locals

. In my opinion, the

advantages

have a more important weight that the

disadvantages

.