Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for the locals?

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amount

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that are going to

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with harsh conditions is increasing,

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like the Sahara desert or the cold Antarctic. It could be stated that the

locals

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obtain many

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the

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of

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that they

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receive

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some people might have another point of view and could believe that it's a disadvantage for the

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. Personally, I believe that

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increasing

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has more

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it has

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. The biggest advantage that

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recieve

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receive

from the increasing

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is the significant

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of income that they

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receive

. The Sahara and the Antarctic are

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located in

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were

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where

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there isn't much development, and multiple studies have proven that

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less developed countries obtain a huge

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of revenue from

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tourism

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,

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of these

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have small

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and

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,

locals

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can work as

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tourists

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guides or

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transport to the visitors.

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in

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of these

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is a significant uplift for their economies.

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,

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can

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have some major

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in

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of these

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, The Sahara desert and the Antarctic are

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places

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with a lot of nature, they are

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really well preserved, bringing

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might affect

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. Visitors probably won't care about the preservation of the natural areas and they might throw trash in these

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. Another example is that the increase

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tourists

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increase the

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of vehicles

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and that would

concequently

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consequently

increase the quantity of

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pollution

in the air.

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nature would be the factor which would

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receive

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the

tourists

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.

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, the

locals

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from these locations would get

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from

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when talking about economics, revenue and income,

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nature would

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receive

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of increasing

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, and

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affects the

locals

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. In my opinion, the

advantages

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have a more important weight that the

disadvantages

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.