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The bar below shows the amount of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years.

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The given graph highlights information about the
amount
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 of
waste
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 which was produced by three organizations over a fifteen-
year
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 period.
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, it can be seen that the amounts of two companies'
waste
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 in the name of A and B decreased over the period in question
while
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 company C increased its misuse
amount
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year
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 by
year
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. Looking at the details, company C was the
last
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 one with 4
tonnes
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 in the first
year
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 and five years later in 2005, the
amount
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 reached 6
tonnes
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 but continued to increase and hit a peak with 10
tonnes
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 in the
last
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year
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 which was the most produced
waste
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 in 2015. If we look at band B, it was in the middle of the list with 8
tonnes
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 in 2000 and continued to be over 9 in the following
year
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 but
then
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 experienced a dramatic decrease and hit a trough with 3
tonnes
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 in 2015. As regards the
last
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 company A, it is obvious that its
waste
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amount
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 was at the top with 12
tonnes
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 in 2000 and it went down gradually and saw 9
tonnes
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 in 2010 but did not stop until 2015 with 8
tonnes
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.

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