The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton park and a plan for proposed changes.

The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton park and a plan for proposed changes.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The following diagrams show a current map of Peyton park and a plan for proposed changes.
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The given diagrams highlight information about the design of Peyton Park at the moment and its newly planned future scheme for redevelopment.
Overall
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, it can be seen that a lot of changes are not about to occur in the whole plan
while
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several small changes will take place. Another striking point is that an additional port will be added to the west
side
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of the
lake
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. Looking at the details, the tennis court which is located to the east
side
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of the
lake
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will be transformed to the west
side
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.
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, the parking area in the south will not experience any change but a swimming duck is going to add to the east
side
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of the
lake
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between the tennis court and the
lake
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.
Following
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this
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, three benches would remain in the same place
as well as
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a picnic area with the exception of adding entertaining games to the northwest
side
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of the park.

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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words side, lake with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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