You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to editor to inform him about it. Use following points: 1) What is the article about? 2) What is the error? 3) What you expect an editor to do?

Dear Sir/Madam, I'm Rafal Latif, writing
this
letter because I found mistakes in the medical and beauty article you have written
last
week. Not as you mentioned in your article Basma Hameed is a plastic surgeon,
makes
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her surgery
in
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at
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a high cost, she is my cousin. Her surgery is every Wednesday in the royal hospital
in addition
to that she has free look-up for poor patients in her own clinic which is located in Toronto.
Moreover
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she makes discounts for orphans and adopted children. I expect your response to change that information Yours sincerely Rafal Latif
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • newspaper
  • article
  • error
  • inaccurate
  • information
  • editor
  • corrections
  • evidence
  • rectify
  • accurate
  • reporting
  • future
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