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The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession

The chart above shows information about various professions in the U.K. and their salaries. The table shows the average working hours per week for each profession
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The graphs elucidate the salary gaps between new
commers
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comers
 and experienced workers in four professions in the UK,
along with
 it, the average working length in various job positions respectively.
Overall
, underground drivers are the most profitable
porfessions
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professions
professionals
profession
 among others,
while
 nurses
working
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work
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 for the lowest payments.
In contrast
, underground
driver
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drivers
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 have the most leisure time
while
 firefighters spent the most
of
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apply
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time on
work
 compared to others.
The most
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Most
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of
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apply
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professions indicate 1000
pound
 salary differences between people with three years
working
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of working
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 experienced and those who just started, except
police
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the police
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, in which the former earned 2000
pound
 more than the latter. On top of that, underground drivers could
earned
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earn
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 up to 51000
pound
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pounds
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 as the highest, which is two times more than nurses, at 19000
pound
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pounds
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. Reversely, underground drivers who earn the most among others, only
work
 36 hours per week,
while
 firefighters spent 55 hours on
work
 per week. Despite nurses earn the least,
however
, they only
work
 38 hours per week,
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words work, pound with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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