The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
IELTS Writing Task Chart for The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
The chart illustrates the
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of vehicles owned per
thousand
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people
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in China from 1987 to 1999.
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,
it is clear that
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being able to own a car became more common, and a significant rise was seen in the
number
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of car
ownership
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throughout the period shown. In 1987, it is the least common for citizens in China to own a vehicle, only less than about 350
cars
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owned per
thousand
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people
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. Over the following six years, the total of
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owned by each person increased gradually by almost threefold, to 1000 vehicles per
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people
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. The increased trend continued. The figure for that in 1995 rose by double to that in 1993. The
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of vehicles owned per
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people
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then
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increased consistently by 1000
cars
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per
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people
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, to 3000, each person owned 3
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average. In 1999, the
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of car ownership rose to a peak of 4200
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per
thousand
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people
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, approximately 12 times higher than that in 1987.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, thousand, people, cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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