The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China. Summarise the differences and comaprisons.

The bar chart below gives information about vehicle ownership in China.

Summarise the differences and comaprisons.
The chart illustrates the
number
of vehicles owned per
thousand
people
in China from 1987 to 1999.
Overall
,
it is clear that
being able to own a car became more common, and a significant rise was seen in the
number
of car
ownership
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owners
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throughout the period shown. In 1987, it is the least common for citizens in China to own a vehicle, only less than about 350
cars
owned per
thousand
people
. Over the following six years, the total of
cars
owned by each person increased gradually by almost threefold, to 1000 vehicles per
thousand
people
. The increased trend continued. The figure for that in 1995 rose by double to that in 1993. The
number
of vehicles owned per
thousand
people
then
increased consistently by 1000
cars
per
thousand
people
, to 3000, each person owned 3
cars
in
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average. In 1999, the
number
of car ownership rose to a peak of 4200
cars
per
thousand
people
, approximately 12 times higher than that in 1987.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, thousand, people, cars with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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