ome people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
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One of the most controversial topics in
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is whether to give them Replace the word
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freedom
to make their own Add an article
the freedom
decisions
in daily matters or not. Although
many believe that being free provides children
some
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with some
believes
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believe
this
could lead them to be self-centered
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following
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the following
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both views will be illustrated and followed by a decisive conclusion.
Some people agree to give Add a comma
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children
authority in making decision
relevant to themselves (Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
such
as choosing their cloths
or arranging their spare time). The first reason coming to mind (to substantiate Correct your spelling
clothes
this
stand) is that it results in self-confidence. The more children
make decision
, the more assertive they will be. As a matter of fact, they become used to Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
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making
decisions
; so, it would be much easier to assert whatever they believe even if it is in contrast
with other’s thoughts. Moreover
, as children
undergo the consequence of their decisions
, they become more responsible of
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for
future
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the future
a future
decision
they would make and they would think twice before undertaking another Fix the agreement mistake
decisions
decision
. Indeed, having liberty
of making Correct article usage
the liberty
decisions
would benefits
them and brings them brighter prospects.
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benefit
However
, others opposed to former belief. In this
school of thought, giving Kids freedom to choose between their alternatives is a route cause of being self-important. They say that children
get used to gain
whatever they want without any restrictions; Change the verb form
gaining
consequently
, they may shun mainstream values in society when they grow up. They might even rebel against some rules in civilization which may cause to
social decline. Standing Change preposition
apply
to
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for
this
reason, naysayers strongly disagree with children
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.
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decisions
To sum up
, the former belief seems to be more convincing than latter
one. Because not only does it good for individuals to be Correct article usage
the latter
risk-taker
and assertive in future, but Correct your spelling
risk-takers
also
independent members would benefits society rather than indecisive ones. However
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be disappear
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children
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