ome people think that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters such as food, clothes and entertainment is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decision about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial topics in

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is whether to give them

freedom

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to make their own

decisions

in daily matters or not.

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many believe that being free provides

children

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opportunities to be more confident and responsible, naysayers

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that

this

could lead them to be

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in their future. In

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both views will be illustrated and followed by a decisive conclusion. Some people agree to give

children

authority in making

decision

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relevant to themselves (

such

as choosing their

cloths

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or arranging their spare time). The first reason coming to mind (to substantiate

this

stand) is that it results in self-confidence. The more

children

make

decision

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, the more assertive they will be. As a matter of fact, they become used to

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decisions

; so, it would be much easier to assert whatever they believe even if it is

in contrast

with other’s thoughts.

Moreover

, as

children

undergo the consequence of their

decisions

, they become more responsible

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future

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decision

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they would make and they would think twice before undertaking another

decision

. Indeed, having

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of making

decisions

would

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them and brings them brighter prospects.

However

, others opposed to former belief. In

this

school of thought, giving Kids freedom to choose between their alternatives is a route cause of being self-important. They say that

children

get used to

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whatever they want without any restrictions;

consequently

, they may shun mainstream values in society when they grow up. They might even rebel against some rules in civilization which may cause

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social decline. Standing

to

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this

reason, naysayers strongly disagree with

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freedom in making

decision

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.

To sum up

, the former belief seems to be more convincing than

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one. Because not only does it good for individuals to be

risk-taker

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and assertive in future, but

also

independent members would benefits society rather than indecisive ones.

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the negative points would

be disappear

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if parents limit

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alternatives and nurture them to consult with reliable people before making

decision

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.