Some believe that it is good for a country's culture to import films and TV programs, while others think it is better for a Country to have their own films and TV programmes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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more effective for countries to bring
foreing
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foreign
films or TV programs,
while
other claims that producing their own visual
entertreinment
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entertainment
would be paramount for each place. I do believe that the production of
movies
or programs may be more convenient when it comes to
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citizens
a chance to participate in local
productions
On the one hand, some advocate that
movies
produced in another country may be more attractive for
citizens
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because some of them have more
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efficient
sound and visual effects to improve
movies
'
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.
As a consequence
,
such
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will probably make the
audience
more interested in what the film is about.
For example
, it is estimated that 4 out of 10 Brazilian
citizens
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that are rather to watch the trilogy of Marvel´s films because of its frenetic and exciting use of visual effects in their scenes.
On the other hand
, giving a chance for local people who are interested in
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local tv
productions
would improve peoples'
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toward visual arts, as it creates an immersive atmosphere that
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citizen
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to represent their culture through the screen.
Consequently
,
this
initiative will make the local people more attracted to local
productions
.
For instance
, it is known that
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India presented a
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increase in
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audience
since it started to use
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local people in
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productions
, which results in more acceptance by the population.
To conclude
, even though importing
movies
or Tv
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programs
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can be effective for some
type
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of
audience
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audiences
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,
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I hold
my stance that giving
citizens
the opportunity to participate in
such
production
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products
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would be more
valiable
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valuable
. Ideally,
such
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a choice
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needs to be made
indidually
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individually
as each country has their unique
audience
.
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