Classroom teachers will be replaced by robots in the nearest future

The emergency of technology has not only affected the whole facets of
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, but
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activities are not left behind. It is believed that in the nearest future
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will replace teachers in the
classrooms
. It disagrees that it will be so as the need for
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face-to-face facilitation
between teacher and
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cannot be overemphasis and the need for effective discipline in children.
This
will be explained
further
in the subsequent paragraph. The importance of face-to-face facilitation between teacher and
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is an important aspect of teaching that cannot be overtaken by robots as humans have been endowed with that special gifts that
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to do with nurturing and directing the students that cannot be sufficiently done by robotic gadgets. The aspects of discipline erring pupils is
also
an important area to be looked into which the robot or other gadgets cannot efficiently overtake,
hence
the need for the continuous presence of teachers in the
classrooms
. In conclusion,
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learning cannot be efficiently taken over by
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in the nearest future as the need for continuous interaction and discipline cannot be joked with.
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