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There has been an increase in the use of technology globally and some said teacher last will be replaced by technology in the classroom.Do you agree or disagree

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There has been an increase in the use of technology globally, and many predicted that
teachers
 may be replaced by Robots in the classroom. I strongly disagree
to
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 because it’s going to cause unemployment for many
teachers
 and would increase the rate of indiscipline among
students
.
This
 essay will explicate these with relevant examples and a logical conclusion. The impact of
teachers
 cannot be overlooked in the society today.They are like parents to us and they need to be maintained in the educational sector.They sacrifice their time to impact
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students
.So many sleepless nights,in order to prepare for class the next morning.All these sacrifices cannot be overlooked. Replacing them with robots will cause them to lose their jobs and
this
 can affect them psychologically.They have to start looking
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 means of income which might not be easy for them.
Secondly
,
This
 will cause an increase in the rate of indiscipline among
students
.
Students
 can never be the same.
For instance
,we have serious and unserious
students
.But with the help of
teachers
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 they can be monitored and advised to change either by punishment or speaking to them.But with the help of robots,can all these be done?No.Most
teachers
 are born with these skills and they’re very good
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 handling children and adults because they’re human. In conclusion,technology should not replace
teachers
 as it will not only affect
teachers
 and
students
 alone but
also
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society because there would be
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 high rate of unemployment in
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society.
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