Some people think that using mobile phones and computers has a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a common belief that technological
devices
have a negative effect on young
people
's writing and reading skills. Personally, I strongly disagree with
this
belief
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and believe that
people
can read whatever they want and can write easily without a pen or paper with technological
devices
.
This
essay will discuss mostly the merits of technological
devices
. Writing and reading is a creative
proccess
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process
which requires
materials
such
as
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paper, a pen, or
documents
.
A technological
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devices
easily provide these
fundemental
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fundamental
materials
at the same time for their
users
with their
softwares
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software
and special applications,
therefore
,
people
do not need
a
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paper or a pen to write anything.
Although
some
people
believe that these
devices
can not replace physical
documents
or pens, the recent applications can provide
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range for both physical
documents
and writing simulations for their
users
.
Users
can both write with electronic pencils or keyboards on their
devices
which can instantly understand the
users
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orders.
This
technique is much faster than
hand writing
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for students and employees which is an alternative and a better method for them.
On the other hand
, lots of reading
materials
are provided online for
users
, and many
people
enjoy huge alternatives for news, reports or e-novels.
For instance
, many newspapers
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available
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online because
the
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customers prefer reading online resources. From my point of view, I do like reading online
materials
rather than physical
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copies
, because the online version of
documents
provides the highlighting opportunity that makes reading
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enjoyable
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process.
To conclude
, many
people
believe that mobile phones and computers have a negative effect on
younger
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generation's reading and writing skills.
In contrast
, my opinion is
people
can write faster and prefer reading online because of some features of their
devices
.
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