It is increasingly becoming popular among students to take a year-off before they graduate. Give your opinion with real life examples?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?

Take

Wrong verb form

Taking

show examples

year

Use synonyms

off before student graduate

are

Change the verb form

show examples

becoming popular but it

also

Linking Words

has advantage and disadvantage. Now I will give some

opinion

Fix the agreement mistake

opinions

show examples

Change preposition

apply

show examples

myself about it in real life. Take a

year

Use synonyms

off for students, they can take a

rest

Use synonyms

for a long

time

Use synonyms

after they

study

Use synonyms

too much. In VietNam, you have to

study

Use synonyms

about

Change preposition

for about

show examples

twelve years before you do a

Linking Words

finally

Change the adverb

final

show examples

examination,

this

Linking Words

is a competition to

decided

Change the form of the verb

decide

show examples

your future . You must

study

Use synonyms

a lot of

thing

Fix the agreement mistake

things

show examples

about science, math, physicals, literature, …. And they would

stressful

Replace the word

stress

show examples

from that

knowledge

Use synonyms

. So I think it

good

Add a missing verb

is good

show examples

for them when they have a

year

Use synonyms

off before they graduate. And

other thing

Change the wording

another thing

other things

show examples

they can do when they have a

year

Use synonyms

off, they can find a

part

Add a hyphen

part-time

show examples

time

Use synonyms

job or full

time

Use synonyms

if they

don’t

Use synonyms

do anything all day to earn their money or take more experience. If they have a long

time

Use synonyms

to take a

rest

Use synonyms

they will

forgot

Change the verb form

forget

show examples

their

Change the word

the

show examples

knowledge

Use synonyms

, they have studied. When they do another thing they want but they

don’t

Use synonyms

study

Use synonyms

as well they will

forgot

Change the verb form

forget

show examples

the information they have done at school,

then

Linking Words

they can’t find a job with higher

paying

Change the form of the verb

pay

show examples

since they

don’t

Use synonyms

know as much as people who

better

Add a missing verb

are better

show examples

than them.

For instance

Linking Words

, if I

don’t

Use synonyms

study

Use synonyms

Change preposition

for a

show examples

long

time

Use synonyms

I would

forgot

Change the verb form

forget

show examples

all

Change the word

the

show examples

knowledge

Use synonyms

I have done. When I find a job they will ask me some

question

Fix the agreement mistake

questions

show examples

, of course I

don’t

Use synonyms

know what is it and they will decline me. So you can take a

rest

Use synonyms

but

don’t

Use synonyms

forgot

Change the verb form

forget

show examples

studying every day to improve your

knowledge

Use synonyms

. In conclusion, students should take a

rest

Use synonyms

but

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

not too long because it is not good for them,

instead

Linking Words

they should have

a days

Correct the article-noun agreement

a day

days

show examples

off for a few months about 3 months or 4.

doanminhkhoi93Fri May 12 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site's author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

Paragraph 1 - Introduction

Sentence 1 - Background statement
Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 4 - Conclusion

Sentence 1 - Summary
Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

6
Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
6
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
24
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

Complete response

5.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

302 words

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7
band
Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standard on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?
Modern technology has really made human lives simple and enabled them to explore areas such as outer space. Although exploring it may be beneficial for human beings, some people feel that the government should spend money to improve living standards on Earth and focus more on the current world problems. However, I would favour more toward the latter opinion for some reasons that are set out below.
7.5
band
Tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs. Smoking has not a single positive issue but lots of negative effects and therefore, it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.
There is an idea which says tobacco has to be dealt with the same as other drugs. this idea believes that smoking due to numerous adverse effects with no benefits on the other side has to be banned. In my opinion, this idea is highly recommended and its feasibility needs to be evaluated.
8
band
Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In the contemporary world, certain individuals are interested in having their own house, while others prefer to hire. For me, it depends mostly on a person’s choice, especially the way of life. In this essay, I shall discuss both points of view and give reasons in order to prove my perspective.
6.5
band
Many people feel that media coverage has become increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?
Some people hold the belief that the spread of information in the media has become increasingly biased these days. In this essay, I will give some plausible explanations and solutions for the problem.
7.5
band
Nowadays many young people are drawn towards dangerous sports. What makes them so attractive? What measures should be taken to regulate such sports and minimise the risks?
There are lots of activities which could go tragically wrong and prove to be dangerous. Some modern youngsters are fond of such sports, this essay will explore why this may be the case and what can be done to reduce the risks of getting involved in those types of activities.

It is increasingly becoming popular among students to take a year-off before they graduate. Give your opinion with real life examples?

Fully explain your ideas

Millions of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standard on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs. Smoking has not a single positive issue but lots of negative effects and therefore, it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

Some people like to own the place where they live, but other people like to rent where they live. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people feel that media coverage has become increasingly biased today. Why is this? What can be done to fix this problem?

Nowadays many young people are drawn towards dangerous sports. What makes them so attractive? What measures should be taken to regulate such sports and minimise the risks?